This is the Final Essay in its entirety.
Overall I got a 68% mark on it, which is around a B grade.
The reason why I got a B grade was mainly my grammar and structure. I was told that I do have good ideas but the way I wrote them down lost the impact I wanted. Also my Citation needs worked on. I feel like I also need more proof reading, I did use a proof reading cite for this but it seems as though it only really fixes grammar.
I should be able to learn from this, I am getting there.
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